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Postby Seb » Mon Aug 25, 2008 11:53 pm

Dalek Thay wrote:I can really see how long it must take, each individual picture...... Well done for producing something of this standard, my friend.


Thanks very much - time well spent in my opinion though! I'm kept sane by my iPod and speakers filled with a good supply of Doctor Who! Audio books, dramas, reconstructions, anything!
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Postby MarthaJonesFan » Tue Aug 26, 2008 12:06 am

Well done Seb. It was amazing! Can't wait for the next episode.
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Postby Icedeath » Tue Aug 26, 2008 2:11 am

Ooh, I liked that!

Is the episode after next a 2 parter.
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Postby Seb » Tue Aug 26, 2008 3:15 pm

Icedeath wrote:Ooh, I liked that!

Is the episode after next a 2 parter.


Yes. Next episode is single, then a 2 parter. I'm going to keep the format of singles/doubles from series 1.
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Postby DALEK DUTTON » Tue Aug 26, 2008 4:59 pm

Well done, i love this comic and good plot
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Postby The 13th Doctor » Tue Aug 26, 2008 5:09 pm

Very nice Seb. Great posing as others have said. Only (slight) criticism is about the 'blank' lighjting. Some of the shots (eg teleport room) could have done with a bit more mood. Conversely this lighting was perfect oin the white room (shades of The Matrix there? :)DT).

Anyway: overall - GREAT. :DDT
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Postby Seb » Tue Aug 26, 2008 5:18 pm

Thanks both!

13th - Lighting is something I'm really working on for the future. This episode I was aiming for a 'Warriors of the Deep' lighting overall (very bright if anyone doesn't know!) to give it that clean feel but I know it could have been better. As to the white room - looking back at it that is a lot like the Matrix, but it was never in my head whilst planning! As I've said, I only did it because the set was really boring and didn't work well enough!
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Postby The 13th Doctor » Tue Aug 26, 2008 6:00 pm

Warriors of the Deep? Yes, I can see that actually.
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Postby Seb » Tue Aug 26, 2008 6:43 pm

The 13th Doctor wrote:Warriors of the Deep? Yes, I can see that actually.


Not the best lighting to copy though, to be honest! :winkDT:
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Postby weepingcarrionite42 » Tue Aug 26, 2008 7:04 pm

smashing seb. as good as the last one ( if not even better.) :DDT looking forward to seeeing more timeslips soon
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Postby a64 » Tue Aug 26, 2008 7:15 pm

The 13th Doctor wrote:Conversely this lighting was perfect oin the white room (shades of The Matrix there? :)DT).

Either that or that white void in SJA, which is what I thought of when everything disappeared and the Graske was there.
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Postby Seb » Tue Aug 26, 2008 7:24 pm

a64 wrote:
The 13th Doctor wrote:Conversely this lighting was perfect oin the white room (shades of The Matrix there? :)DT).

Either that or that white void in SJA, which is what I thought of when everything disappeared and the Graske was there.


True, true. All probably in my head but not consciously - honest!
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Postby Yoda » Tue Sep 02, 2008 7:59 pm

I was wondering how you did the white rooms a really good idea Seb
Wow very good plot and nice pictures can't wait for more
The only criticism i have is that the plot is a little confusing(i might go back and re-read it when i get the chance though or i might even read the first then the second)
Well done Seb!
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Postby Seb » Tue Sep 02, 2008 8:15 pm

Yoda wrote:I was wondering how you did the white rooms a really good idea Seb
Wow very good plot and nice pictures can't wait for more
The only criticism i have is that the plot is a little confusing(i might go back and re-read it when i get the chance though or i might even read the first then the second)
Well done Seb!
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Thanks very much! The plot did get more complicated as I went into it, and I was aware that it could be a bit confusing, but if you read episode one then episode two, especially with second reading, I hope it makes more sense!

I felt as long as everyone has a good idea of what's going on, even if they don't understand everything, that should be fine. Those who still want to understand more, and pick up the references and subtle points etc. can read it again and again and again... (or not!)
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Postby Yoda » Sat Sep 13, 2008 9:07 pm

I just re-read the comic and i understood it alot more than the first time can't wait for episode 3
just a few questions Seb:
Where did you get the teleport mchine with the levers seen near the beginnin?-did you make it?
and where did you get the gun Kudlak uses to kill the computer anomoly??
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