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by The Professor » Sat Oct 22, 2011 7:29 pm
A new Third Doctor comic which should be a four parter? Probably three, I'm not sure.
The first part will be up...
Within the hour!
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by DalekSupreme08 » Sat Oct 22, 2011 7:31 pm
Don't forget to add a comic heading when it's out! Sounds great, looking forward to it! 
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by The Professor » Sat Oct 22, 2011 8:07 pm
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by DalekSupreme08 » Sat Oct 22, 2011 8:12 pm
The heading hasn't come up, you need to edit the first post to make it come up.  Great comic! Good editing, and the plot is exciting, I wonder who the woman could be?
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by The Professor » Sat Oct 22, 2011 8:19 pm
Ah, didn't realise it was the first post.
The woman... is just an inspector! Sorry about that. Slightly anticlimatic I know, but still. Next part... Wednesday? I know what I'm like with deadlines though....
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by a64 » Sat Oct 22, 2011 9:05 pm
Not very much happened, did it?  Photography's generally good, and the set's nice. Sometimes the text is hard to read (white on orange). The first page is a bit of a mess - the speech bubbles are the wrong way round too - but I'm intruiged for the rest of it. 
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by The Professor » Sun Oct 23, 2011 10:48 pm
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by a64 » Sun Oct 23, 2011 10:55 pm
Ooh that's very nice! One thing that struck me - certainly if it was one long comic - was that Part I was a little bit irrelevant. We didn't necessarily need to see the Doctor disappear - having the TARDIS console and the note and just a bit of introduction probably would have worked. But then I don't know how the next part or so is going to turn out. 
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by DalekSupreme08 » Sun Oct 23, 2011 11:15 pm
I agree with a64. Looking forward to next time! 
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by The Professor » Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:58 pm
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by DalekSupreme08 » Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:23 pm
Very clever plot! I liked it, your comics are brilliant! 
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by The Professor » Tue Oct 25, 2011 11:03 pm
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
Would it be worth a behind the scenes? Not much tosay, I suppose, but I do have my original notes, and a se3mi-interesting story about how I got the blood onto Jenny.
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by tombaker64 » Tue Oct 25, 2011 11:30 pm
Nice comic Professor  . The plot was good and the blood on Miss Biko's forhead looked very realistic. I'm guessing the Dr Bashir thing was a Star Trek reference  . I remember the name from an episode back when I used to watch it.
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by a64 » Tue Oct 25, 2011 11:36 pm
Quite good really.  Perhaps a little more explanation onto how or why the Doctor got there. He said earlier that his experiment went wrong, and basically she had to activate the TARDIS to get it to follow him... still, more dialogue might be nice. (and how did he sent the letter from the prehistoric times? Unless she was following him through history..) Lovely blood there (jam? perhaps) which has reminded me that I've never tried that trick before. It's a very massive 'cut'! A behind the scenes would be great. 
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by The Professor » Wed Oct 26, 2011 1:16 pm
Behind the ScenesOk, so here's the behind the scenes. Original notes -   So as you can see, it would've originally been a bit more complicated, and some things just came spontaneously. The Doctor Bashir line was indeed a Star Trek reference, aother show that I love. The blood... we've had some good guesses, but I doubt that you'd ever really get it. The reason it looked so realistic was because... it was real blood!! I had a little cut on my knee, the size of a pinprick really, and I picked of the scab, and lot's of blood came out. So I used it. The lengths I go to! So... that's it really! Although...  Hopefully.... 
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