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Postby Seb » Sun Oct 12, 2008 2:45 pm

rypie wrote:when you doin the next one can't wait


More news on the future coming soon...
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Postby Jast » Sun Oct 12, 2008 5:10 pm

Just read it now - and I see what you meant in that post from... whenever it was.
But simply brilliant, as always. Certainly the best yet I'd say!
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Postby Matt » Sun Oct 12, 2008 5:13 pm

Finally got the chance to read it - and wow! But the dalek, is that going to feature later on in the series? Looking forwards to the next one now too.
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Postby Seb » Sun Oct 12, 2008 5:36 pm

Thanks so much - feeback like this makes it all worthwhile!
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Postby Yoda » Sun Oct 12, 2008 6:12 pm

WWWWOOWW
I loved it
I really loved the sets and after doing the homework i have to do i'll look for the muppets thing-really great set!

An intresting story and i liked how Peter (Also my name!) bossed the Doctor around at the end.

The only thing that could be better i would say is the lighting in the cave-but there agin it was quite good and it is a cave after all!
Can't wait for the next stories!
I see how the link on the main page links into the story!
Well done Seb
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Postby MarthaJonesFan » Sun Oct 12, 2008 7:42 pm

Great episode! Well done Seb. I can't wait for the next episode. :)DT
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Postby Dalek-Dan » Sun Oct 12, 2008 10:43 pm

It was great. Only thing is, there was things that were left un explained. Toby does not die, any way not yet. Apart from that fantastic. :)DT
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Postby a64 » Sun Oct 12, 2008 10:49 pm

[quote="Dalek-Dan":oDTomrty0p]It was great. Only thing is, there was things that were left un explained. Toby does not die, any way not yet. Apart from that fantastic. :)DT[/quote:oDTomrty0p]
Well, maybe...

1) The Doctor's visit to Krop Tor made the Beast awake Toby and kill him, so if the Doctor never visited with Rose then he chose someone else or didn't awake?

2) The trip to Glindo made Toby not go to the SB6 mission.

3) He tossed a coin whether to work for the Judoon or the Torchwood Archive.. and somehow the coin landed differently in that universe.

4) Or, most likely, the Doctor was never meant to go there and after a pretty uneventful mission back in the normal universe, Toby went off to Krop Tor met the Doctor and died. Perfect.
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Postby Seb » Mon Oct 13, 2008 12:54 am

a64 wrote:4) Or, most likely, the Doctor was never meant to go there and after a pretty uneventful mission back in the normal universe, Toby went off to Krop Tor met the Doctor and died. Perfect.


That's my version - but it never got to the final edit because I couldn't find a good place to put this. Yes, I imagined that Toby did this job in the 'real Who' Universe before going to Krop Tor. In the 'real Who' Universe the budget simply ran low and they never got to the heart of the planet at that stage - it just wasn't important enough - but at some point in the future it happens and the people who activate the machine die in the explosion.
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Postby a64 » Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:56 pm

Fan next-time trailer (for this ep): http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=mUyhIs6a1gs :DDT
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Postby TheDoctor10 » Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:14 pm

Nice work, i actually thought the Judoon were there!
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Postby doctorwhofan82 » Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:55 pm

in the words of john barrowman


FANTASTIC, FANTASTIC, FANTASTIC

loved the whole thing
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Postby Seb » Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:28 pm

doctorwhofan82 wrote:in the words of john barrowman


FANTASTIC, FANTASTIC, FANTASTIC

loved the whole thing


My comic or the trailer? :winkDT:

Seriously - brilliant trailer, thanks so much a64 - means a lot to see people doing things like that about my work!
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Postby doctorwhofan82 » Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:30 pm

both the same in brilliantness


the trailer is really cleverly done especially the judoon voice bit with peter
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Postby Dalek-Dan » Sun Oct 19, 2008 11:55 am

The adverts are ok, but they are made dramatic and it ends out, well - no offence - a little bigged up for what it is. :?
I have to admit though the judoon bit was fantastic, and it is cleaver how you do it. :)DT
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