David Jones - Ep 7 - Slitheen on a Train (UP NOW!)

[a64]

Link: http://drwhofigures.co.uk/dj/7/0.htm



David is on the run - and has caught a train going to Cardiff to address Bob gave him...

But he is not alone on the train. A struggling MP hounded by reporters. A young man with a piece of alien technology. The train's waitress. An assassin set to find David Jones...

And somewhere on the train a Slitheen is lurking...

As the Slitheen's plan is set into motion, can David save the world - and survive?


It's been a bit of a delay - but that's because it's the longest comic yet! It's about 38 pages long - and expect it at the end of this week (friday/saturday).

[Beep]

Cool.Hope its up tonght,sounds great.

EDIT:thats what I thought,too,sontar ha.

[Sontar Ha]

A struggling MP hounded by reporters. (Ianto?) A young man with a piece of alien technology. (Connor?) The train's waitress. (Astrid?) An assassin set to find David Jones... (Tom Ryan?)

[DoctorWhoDave]

A struggling MP hounded by reporters. (Ianto?) A young man with a piece of alien technology. (Connor?) The train's waitress. (Astrid?) An assassin set to find David Jones... (Tom Ryan?)

I assume they're meant to be new characters. Just about everyone does it in comic strips.

I'm so excited for this episode. It sounds just amazing. And I love the idea of the assassin on the train. Just the thought of that. You're stuck on a train, no where you can possible escape to and someone is there trying to kill you! Amazing!

[Beep]

A struggling MP hounded by reporters. (Ianto?) A young man with a piece of alien technology. (Connor?) The train's waitress. (Astrid?) An assassin set to find David Jones... (Tom Ryan?)

I assume they're meant to be new characters. Just about everyone does it in comic strips.

I'm so excited for this episode. It sounds just amazing. And I love the idea of the assassin on the train. Just the thought of that. You're stuck on a train, no where you can possible escape to and someone is there trying to kill you! Amazing!

And then theres also the slitheen to worry about too!talk about a bad situation!

[Seb]

So everyone knows - I'm just trying to get it on the DWFO server, but it's pretty huge so is taking some time! Won't be too long now though...

[a64]

Cool.Hope its up tonght,sounds great.

Sadly it's more likely it'll be up (earlyish) tommorrow. (Or sooner?)

A struggling MP hounded by reporters. (Ianto?) A young man with a piece of alien technology. (Connor?) The train's waitress. (Astrid?) An assassin set to find David Jones... (Tom Ryan?)

I assume they're meant to be new characters. Just about everyone does it in comic strips.

You're correct Sontar... but, yes, if you want to do a decent story involving lots of characters then that's the only way round it really, unless you do customs. The Tom Ryan and Astrid figures look quite generic anyway, so it shouldn't be too confusing! And some of them aren't in it for very long!

[Beep]

Cool.Hope its up tonight,sounds great.

Sadly it's more likely it'll be up (earlyish) tommorrow.

So everyone knows - I'm just trying to get it on the DWFO server, but it's pretty huge so is taking some time! Won't be too long now though...

Im confused.

[Seb]

Cool.Hope its up tonight,sounds great.

Sadly it's more likely it'll be up (earlyish) tommorrow.

So everyone knows - I'm just trying to get it on the DWFO server, but it's pretty huge so is taking some time! Won't be too long now though...

Im confused.

Evidently a64 doesn't believe in how quickly I can get the comic up!

[Sontar Ha]

Sorry, I meant is that who is playing who. I know that it is almost impossible to makea good story without reusing a character.

Yes. (sorry, that wasn't worth another post) - a64

[Seb]

It's an honour to present David Jones Episode 7: Slitheen on a Train!

In the words of Timeslip - expect the unexpected!!

http://drwhofigures.co.uk/dj/7/0.htm

Enjoy!

[Sontar Ha]

It's an honour to present David Jones Episode 7: Slitheen on a Train!

In the words of Timeslip - expect the unexpected!!

http://drwhofigures.co.uk/dj/7/0.htm

Enjoy!

Yes! It's up! Now, where are my glasses...

[Sontar Ha]

And a fab read! I really liked the claustraphobic setting. 10/10. I think the Cyberman epiosde was better though.

[DoctorWhoDave]

Oh. My. God!
What can I say? Amazing!
Amazing story (as always). Amazing photography (as always). Amazing sets (as always). Amazing editing (as always). Out-of-this-world comic (as always)!

It was such a clever episode and I loved every single page. It was amazing and the train was so brilliantly done.

My favourite part though had to be where David and Daniel Spade (Nice Timeslip reference ) were just sat and talking at the table. It was just perfect! Most people would have them running round, trying everything but you had them just sat down, facing death, and having a chat. Perfect!

Really amazing episode as always with some amazing effects (The Slitheen reveal was incredible!).
Brilliant!

[Dalek-Dan]

It was good, but the sets sometimes look too flimsy, and the use of figures for background characters makes this seem a one off thing, not seven in your series. Still though, a very nice plot, and good use of most figures. 6/10 - Sarah dead, that over-stepped the line.